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Post by hokage333 on Fri May 29, 2009 9:43 am

Prolouge:

Naruto Uzumaki was running through the streets of the Hidden Leaf Village, heading tword the hospital as fast as he could. It took him about 3 minutes to get there, and by that time, tsunade had felt his chakra and opened the door for him.
"How bad is it?" The genin inquired.
"I'm sorry Naruto, there is nothing we can do for him...he has 1 hour to live. I'm sorry."
"What? But you're the greatest Medic kunochi ever! Can't you do anything for him?"
"What do you think I've been working 3 days without sleep for? I'm sorry, but it's over."
"NNN..Naruto..." a weak voice from the door in front of called "Naruto, please, I've excepted defet. Please, come in so i can see you for one last time"
Naruto opened the door to see Kakashi. His face was filled with tears and saddness of losing his sensei.
"Hello, Naruto." The copy ninja said.
"You called me, sensei?" Naruto asked with a sob.
"Naruto, before i die, there is somthing i want to give you. It is the power to copy ninjutsu. Will you except it?"
"Wait, when you say the power to except ninjutsu, do you mean..." Naruto pointed at Kakashi's covered eye.
"Yes, exctly. Will you exept it?"
"Of course! But how will i get it?"
"Lady Tsunade has agreed to transfer 1/2 it's power to your left eye, and 1/2 it's power to your right" The Hokage nodded as he said this.
"But won't I have to cover both my eyes, then?"
"No, since you will have it in both eyes. You will then be able to use it at will."
"ALRIGHT! NO MORE TALK! LET'S START!" The Medic screamed. She walked over to Kakashi, and uncovered his eye. She then put Her hand over it. The she Put Her other hand over both of Naruto's eyes.
"Medical Ninjutsu: Dojutsu Transfer!" Tsunade said while imagining The hand signs in her mind. There wa a Flash of Blue, then a red spark started to travel from Kakashi's eye's to Tsunade's arms. It traveled around her body and to Naruto's eyes. Then in another flash of Blue Kakashi passed on to the void, Where he met his Beloved Rin once more. But that is a different Story.
Meanwhile, Naruto had been thrown on the floor. When he got up, he tought there was somthing different about the room. Then he heard Tsunade exclaim "Naruto, look at your eyes!"
Naruto Took out his pocket mirror and looked at himself. He saw Everything was the same, but then when he got to his eyes, His mouth just dropped. He, Naruto Uzumaki, the boy who had a HUGE rivlry with an Uchiha, Now had the Sharingan!!! He only had 2 comma marks, but he would train.
Outside the window, Tobi stood and watched, invisible.
"Well, Well. the fox Brat has the sharingan. Very interesting...."

Next Chapter: Rasendori!!!!!!!

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Re: The Power of the Sharingan...

Post by Salamence808 on Fri May 29, 2009 10:05 am

Sounds good if you ask me
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Re: The Power of the Sharingan...

Post by hokage333 on Fri May 29, 2009 10:07 am

Salamence808 wrote:Sounds good if you ask me

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Re: The Power of the Sharingan...

Post by Demon_Jinchuriki on Fri May 29, 2009 2:44 pm

Dude this is so beast cant wait for the next one What a Face
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Re: The Power of the Sharingan...

Post by hokage333 on Fri May 29, 2009 3:15 pm

Demon_Jinchuriki wrote:Dude this is so beast cant wait for the next one What a Face

THANK YOU!
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Re: The Power of the Sharingan...

Post by hokage333 on Fri May 29, 2009 4:46 pm

kk, so when do you guys want chapter one to be up? i can do:

every 2 days
every 4 days
every week.
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Re: The Power of the Sharingan...

Post by Demon_Jinchuriki on Fri May 29, 2009 5:26 pm

Every minute! cheers But seriously, it and depends when its good with you. The earlier, the better.

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Chapter 1: Rasendori!!!!

Post by hokage333 on Mon Jun 01, 2009 12:33 pm

It had been 2 weeks since Pain attacked the village. 1 1/2 weeks since Kakashi was put in the hospital. And it had been 2 days sine Kakashi died giving Naruto the Sharingan. The village was in the proccess of being rebuilt, and it was almost complete[Thanks to Yamato and Naruto], but where was Naruto???

Locatin: Training field

Naruto was in the training feild yet again, trying to master the CHIDORI. He was actully almost done, because he was using the same training method as when he was trying to make the Rasenshuriken. At first, he didn't know what to do, or even how to make the chakara come out of his hand. Then a little surprise came: Lady Tsunade knew the Chidori! So when she approched him, asking him if he wanted to know it, he was dumbfounded[not very uncommen for him]. He asked her where she had learned it, and it turns out that she had learned it from Kakashi in her free time! So She taught him the basics, and after 1 1/2 days, he had make a "Chidori". it was not perfect, but it was extremly good for his first time. So here he was, trying to perfect it.
"Come on...work, work, WORK!!" Naruto exclaimed, as lightning started to run through his arm.
"Sweet! This feel much more powerful than yesterday!" The Genin screamed to his clones. Then he saw somthing that suprised him so much, he almost fainted. His Rival, Sasuke Uchiha, was Right in front of him.
"So, the rumors are true then. You do have the Sharingan. That fool Kakshi gave it to you, right?"
" What the hell are you doing here, Sasuke? You're not So stupid to try and come into this village alone, are you?"
"Ahh, but I did come here alone. All I came to do is murder you, and then my plan can be thrown into action."
"Plan, what plan?"
"Why, you'll have to defet me to find out, and since you can't, I guess you wont know"
"Fine if that's how it is, so be it" Naruto then told his Clones"Take care of him for a bit, I'll be back in a flash"
"Just where do you think your going?"
"Reverse Summoning Jutsu!" Naruto Shouted, then he avapporated into thin air.

Toad world
Naruto went to the demension of toads when he said his reverse summoning. He then went to seek out a certian person....

"Hey, Cloney, Where are you????" Naruto asked himself. Then Naruto[another one] Came out of the bushes, but this one was in Sage mode.
"Hey, Cloney!!! Ok, listen. your gonna have to poof away, into me, so i can become sage mode quickly. Ok?"
"Sure!" said "Cloney", while he dissappeared. Then Naruto felt a surge of chakara, and he was in Sage Mode!
"Ok Sasuke, let's see how you like this." Naruto said, while evaporatining into space

Back on the training feild

"Hehe, I'm impressed Naruto, You still have one clone standing" Sasue stated, about to finish off the last clone. Then, Naruto[the real one] Came back from the toad world.
"Good job clone. you can come back now." Naruto said.
"Yes!" The clone said. then he evaporated.
"Now Sasuke, Let's see what you can do!"
"What Form is that? Is it apart of the Kyubbi's chakara?"
"Nope. Not at all. This is all me!"
"Ok, then let's begin!"

Sasuke Rushed forward so fast, it seemed like he transported. But to naruto, he seem slow. Sasuke drew his sword, and wwn for naruto's heart. Naruto doged it easily, then he kneed Sasuke in his gut.
"Ooff!!" Sasuke exclamied, flying backwards. "What kind of power did naruto gain?" the rouge asked himself. Sasuke then got up, and started a chidori.
"Let's see you block this!" He shouted. Naruto also started a chidori, Then thought he should make a rasengan, which he started in the same hand. The Fusion of the 2 jutsu was extreme. the Whid that was supposed tp fly out had extreme amounts of lightning in them. It was a rasengan, with Lightning and wind. It was...
"Rasendori!!!!!!!" Naruto shouted, chakra swirling around him.
"What!?!?!?!?!?!?" Sasuke exclaimed, amazed. His chidori died down, and he started to back off.
"AAHHHHHH!!!!!" Naruto cried, as he Flashed tword Sasuke. It hit sasuke square in the chest, and then Sasuke Transfromed into Grandma Tsunade!
"Grandma Tsunade! What just happened?????"
Tsunade evaporated, then Came out of the trees.
"Aaaa..mm..AMAZING! Naruto, d'you realize what just happened? You fused the 2 most dangerous jutsu, and you controled it! Look at how much damage it did!" Tsunade said pointing around him.
He looked, and he saw a huge craterin front of him. It was About 10 feet deep, 4 feet wide.
"That was just from the after effects. i wonder what would've happened if you did hit the trees!"
"Grandma, what the heck is going on? I thought i was Fighting Sasuke, but it was you! Why?" Naruto asked, utterly confused
"Well, that was a shodow clone of me. I thought if you were in a life and death situation, you would master the chidori under pressure. You did that, and more."
"Ohh. I get it now!" Naruto said
"And since you did such a great job, I'll call Iruka and tell him to take you out for ramen!" Tsunade said
"YES!!!!!" Naruto exclaimed happily.

Behind them, Invisble, Tobi was staring, Dumbfounded.
"So the brat mastered and Ultrapowerful jutsu, huh? well, I'll have to make a new plan now." Tobi said quietly. He then took out his phone and called someone.
"Yes, I wanted ELEMINATED! I'll give you 2 weeks. That's it." Tobi muttered into the phone menecingly
There was a reply, and tobi smiled to himself.
"Good." He said, and then he hung up the phone.

Next Chapter: Mangekyo Awakened!




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Re: The Power of the Sharingan...

Post by Demon_Jinchuriki on Mon Jun 01, 2009 3:10 pm

What the heck? Ok some werid things this time, why did you name it "cloney"? And when do Naruto characters have phones?? Hey but its nice I like it. Very Happy And let me guess, Naruto is gonna get the mangekyo sharingan in the next chapter, right? tongue

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Re: The Power of the Sharingan...

Post by hokage333 on Mon Jun 01, 2009 7:59 pm

Demon_Jinchuriki wrote:What the heck? Ok some werid things this time, why did you name it "cloney"? And when do Naruto characters have phones?? Hey but its nice I like it. Very Happy And let me guess, Naruto is gonna get the mangekyo sharingan in the next chapter, right? tongue

i have no idea. it just came to me.

and everyone has a phone, they just don't use it. Shocked

im not giving anything away
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Post by hokage333 on Tue Jun 02, 2009 4:55 pm

hey people! please tell me what you think of this. i want some more reader input before i put up chapter 2. and i want to see how many people read chapter 1.
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Post by darkmadara11 on Tue Jun 02, 2009 5:34 pm

hokage333 wrote:hey people! please tell me what you think of this. i want some more reader input before i put up chapter 2. and i want to see how many people read chapter 1.

hey, dont forget to read my manga as well. if i see you guys like it ill continue it! :3

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Re: The Power of the Sharingan...

Post by hokage333 on Wed Jun 03, 2009 6:59 am

darkmadara11 wrote:
hokage333 wrote:hey people! please tell me what you think of this. i want some more reader input before i put up chapter 2. and i want to see how many people read chapter 1.

hey, dont forget to read my manga as well. if i see you guys like it ill continue it! :3

kk, i'll do that right now.
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Re: The Power of the Sharingan...

Post by hokage333 on Wed Jun 03, 2009 8:18 pm

darkmadara11 wrote:
hokage333 wrote:hey people! please tell me what you think of this. i want some more reader input before i put up chapter 2. and i want to see how many people read chapter 1.

hey, dont forget to read my manga as well. if i see you guys like it ill continue it! :3

ya, i forgot to ask, wat did u think of this chapter?
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Re: The Power of the Sharingan...

Post by Cdoubleyou on Fri Jun 05, 2009 7:01 pm

Well this is kool and all but hatake is actually a adapable clan which is why kakashi took in the sharingan without his body turning it away so naruto couldn't possibly hold sharingan without his body rejecting it.

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Re: The Power of the Sharingan...

Post by hokage333 on Fri Jun 05, 2009 7:26 pm

Cdoubleyou wrote:Well this is kool and all but hatake is actually a adapable clan which is why kakashi took in the sharingan without his body turning it away so naruto couldn't possibly hold sharingan without his body rejecting it.

it's a FICTION for a reason, dude. and how d'you know the uzumaki clan couldn't be like that either?
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Post by Cdoubleyou on Fri Jun 05, 2009 8:17 pm

I know its fiction I was being a smart ass =)

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Post by hokage333 on Sat Jun 06, 2009 7:32 am

Cdoubleyou wrote:I know its fiction I was being a smart ass =)

lol, that's cool.
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Re: The Power of the Sharingan...

Post by hidan666 on Sat Jun 06, 2009 10:23 am

it was pretty cool, except for the fact that thar kinda jutsu should have made a bigger explosion
still i cant wait for the next chapter
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Re: The Power of the Sharingan...

Post by hokage333 on Tue Jun 09, 2009 8:52 am

hidan666 wrote:it was pretty cool, except for the fact that thar kinda jutsu should have made a bigger explosion
still i cant wait for the next chapter

maybe......

cool.
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